Thursday, March 10, 2011

                              Candy
   
             I love candy so much
                           candy is very
                                 sweet


              First time i eat candy is really
              sweet and sometimes is sour
              candy has many flavor is taste 
              really good , i really love candy
              Candy makes me really hyper
              it comes in a different color blue,
              white ,orange, purple and pink
                               
                           i love it 
                     i want some candy
              it really good to eat candy 








           Ice Cream


        Ice cream is my favorite
     dessert after i eat a dinner and lunch
    ice cream made by a cow milk and is 
   taste really good i love ice cream so much
   ice cream make my day become cold 
   so many flavor that is taste really good
  we have ice cream the best in the town
  yellow ice cream is lemony and tart 
   it is sweet and yummy, is the best think
            Vanilla  white is a popular
               flavor and taste very
                   good i like it
                     so much 
                      i'm in 
                        love
                         with
                          ice
                         cream




Explanation
my shape poem all about food because love food so much but i think
its all about ice cream and candy because they are very sweet and very good taste
me and my friends always eat ice cream and candy
it was very great when i was eat ice cream and candy . for me ice cream and candy is a good desert .


                

Haiku

         Friends


Laughing all the time
Keeping our all secret
I love you my friends


   Friends


We always hang out
Planning for our party
This is so much fun


 Friends


You've got a secret?
You need to really keep it 
That is a friendship 


  Friends


Having a great time
Laughing out loud everyday
friends are important


  Friends


Parties, mailings, friends
I enjoy being with friends
Do you enjoy too ?


  Friends


Friends her, everywhere
Glad to have real friends
Do you have friends too






Explanation
Friends are very important , i really enjoy that i having so much friends 
for me when me and my friends having fun is we make our slumber party and hang out at the mall and we having a great time together. Friends always helping us if we having some problems so we need to say thank you to our friends if they help us 

Acrostic poem

She always make us laugh
Always respect people 
Love to sing and dance
Sometimes she is being crazy
Also she is a good friend


Always do home works everyday
Laughing all the time in the class
Make us proud
And she the smart girl in my class


Young girl that was really smart
Always make her parents proud
Sometimes she is little bit crazy
Most all the time laughing by her self but she is very
Intelligent person and she would
Never make her friends sad because she love her friends


Always make all of her friends laugh
Really a brave girl 
I love her so much because she is very delightful
Eating a healthy food because she 
Love being a healthy girl


Sometimes life become difficult i really 
Thought that life is easy, we 
Always having a big problem and we can't
Really handle it by our self 
Lot of pain in our life and 
Inside our deep heart is feel that something was
Gone away from our life , is really 
Heavy for me and i can't
Think enough anymore


Nearly today was a every good day
Always make me smile everyday , the sky is
Really blue and bright 
Never be a bad day and so many fantastic places
Is very beautiful out here
And adventure is every where 


Explanation
my Acrostic poem is actually about friends and adventure . i choose all my best friends name because i love them so much they always make me laugh everyday they are really important for me . About the others is adventure like Narnia . Narnia actually is a adventure movie i really love the move is so fantastic

Free style without rhyme

Friends

Friends smile, friends cry
Friends fight, friends laugh
Friends care, friends ignore                             
Friends have fun, friends have problems
Friends give up, friends are strong
Friends are lucky , friends are unlucky 
Friends gossip,friends keep a secret
Friends helps , friends hurts
Friends are........?


Explanation 
this poem is all about friends. Friends are very important for me because without friends
i cannot do anything and i don't have any fun in my life .Without friends my life is boring . we need them because they always help us and make us happy . but sometimes we have a fight and we hurt each other but then we forgive each other . For me friends are like my family 

Free style with rhyme

Holiday 


Holiday is very important for me 
Why? because they make me free


Is time for vacation 
Which so passion 


I go to parties 
And eat some candies 


I can sleep over
And have fun forever 


Holiday is really exciting 
And i can do anything 








Explanation 
my freestyle poem is about holiday , for me holiday is like my favorite day 
holiday is always make me free from all of home works and schools . when i was having a holiday i always wake up late , eat, watching TV , playing video games with my cousin and having a great party every night with friends . Holiday is very important for me because i really need a break time for doing so many home works and going to school every day 





Sonnet (pettrachan sonnet)

Problems

Problems are everywhere anywhere
Problems are difficult make us all sweat
Problems make you tired , make you sick i bet
Problem make you cry ,Tey never no where
Problems run after us, they chase up there             
Problems are always with me any my pet

I cry so hard , my eyes grow red  and wet
sometimes i want to give up, i cant bear

We all have problems adults , child,big,small
We can fight them , we can solve properly
We cam dance ,we cam sing , and go to mall
We can solve it step by step or quickly
if we give up things easily fall
If that happens you will live terribly






Explanation 
my pettrachan sonnet is about all my problems like in our life we have so many problem 
so problem is any question or matter involving doubt, uncertainty, or difficulty.
well in my life sometimes i have a problem with my friends and my family or with my sister and my cousin , sometimes we having a fight or we do something wrong to someone . Problem sometimes make us stronger sometimes problem make us sad or angry .



Sonnet (shakespear)

My sister

My twin sister look exatcly like
we have the same choices of everything
when we were younger we used to ride a bike          
we do what we want as in anything

But sometimes we do have many complaints
which can end up to big fights and quarrel
Small quarrels lead to big quarrels and fights
I want to be in the tour of Eiffel

But we do love each other so dearly
We support, we laugh, we smile , we do care
We have goals in life, achive properly
If we are apart, sometimes we can't bear

My sister has been my inspiration
This poem can lead to admiration



Family

My mom, my dad , my sister and me
We care , we love ,we smile and we all laugh
We trust each other and they all love me
One member of our family she fluff

Sometimes we fight and scream and cry so loud
I go to my room , locked it all alone
My dad scolds , my mom hugs, then sorry said
i call my my friends, tell them over the phone

I have a very happy family
My dad works , my mom works for all of us
They tech us good values prayerfully
they teach us to be sinple also wise
They took care of me since i was baby

it is so cool to have them getting stronger
it is so nice to have them getting closer


Explanation
This shakespear poem is about my family . Well family is a group of something that we love each other , family have mother , father , sons, daughters , granda , gramdpa and cousin and others.
i have 1 twin sister and i have my mom and my dad .Family is very important for me because if i don't have family i can't life by myself i will never been there. My family always protect me and support me i love them so much . i always give them love and always support them and protect them .